My entry for the WEP (Write…Edit…Publish) April Challenge:
Instead of a short story, I’m posting a poem.
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TEARS IN THE RAIN
Somewhere
a child is crying
innocence lost
Somewhere
a woman is lamenting
her mate, fighting
Wars
kill, murder
lives, loved ones
torn apart
*
Tears in the rain
Tears in the rain
All they have left
Are tears in the rain
*
Somewhere
a mother is weeping
her child, dying
Somewhere
a teen’s call for help
has gone unanswered
Disease
of body, mind
lives, loved ones
torn apart
*
Tears in the rain
Tears in the rain
All they have left
Are tears in the rain
*
Somewhere
a town is carried away
by water, by wind
Somewhere
the land, a mountain is burning
no relief in sight
Nature
friend or foe
lives, loved ones
torn apart
*
Tears in the rain
Tears in the rain
All they have left
Are tears in the rain
*
When will the clouds break?
When will this deluge end?
*
As flowers bloom
after a season of cold death
life, too, begins anew
nourished by
tears in the rain
transforming, replenishing
the damaged, the ruined
*
Resiliency of the human spirit
enduring
thru the darkest of storms
*
Tears in the rain
Tears in the rain
Let them fall
These tears in the rain
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Word Count 200: NCCO
Tag: Life is like tears in the rain
Powerful! Love the repeating stanza and the rise in hope. We are resilient and that’s just what we need! Let the flowers bloom!
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Thank you, Jemi! 🙂
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Hi Carrie Ann – I loved this … another take on life … we are resilient, we will cope, we will return, life does return … and life does bloom with rain, heavy or otherwise .. congratulations – Hilary
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Thank you, Hilary 🙂
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Wonderful poem, very strong emotionally.
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Thank you, Olga 🙂
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An excellent poem, tears in the rain. I could feel the emotion.
Nancy
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Thank you, Nancy! 🙂
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Thank you.
I loved this – not least the element of hope, of renewal. Something we all need as the hard rains bucket down on too many.
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Thank you! 🙂
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Emotional and powerful. The repetition emphasises the imagery. Like also that it ends on a note of hope. Well done!
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Thank you 🙂 🙂
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Your words are powerful and speak of so many horrors that exist in the world. I like how you turned toward hope at the end. Well done!
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Thank you 🙂
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Another beautiful poem that could be a song. Life is a journey, they say we choose the path. I find that hard to believe. But stranger things are true. Well done!
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Thank you, Yolanda! 🙂
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This heartrending poem brought to mind Walt Whitman’s Leaves of Grass – I sit and look out. “I SIT and look out upon all the sorrows of the world, and upon all
oppression and shame,”
Hard rain just keeps on falling. It’s no respecter of persons.
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Thank you, Denise 🙂
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Could be a poem or song lyrics. Good way to use the prompt.
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Always wanted to learn how to write song lyrics. 🙂
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So much sorrow in the world. Powerful poetry. I loved the idea of repetition.
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Thank you, Sonia 🙂
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A beautiful, sad, and timely poem.
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Thank you for reading this poem. 🙂
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Tears in the rain, for the saddest reasons. I can hear this as a song.
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Me too! 🙂
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Powerful, emotional, and well-written.
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Thank you 🙂
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Tears in the rain – brilliant and then to know that they can bring life back, again brilliant.
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Thank you, Sally 🙂
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Such a timely poem! In some ways it reminds me of an article I just read, about how there are fewer and fewer telephone boxes across England, and how those who need to reach out may not have a chance to do so anymore…
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Thank you 🙂
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Hi Carrie Ann – congratulations on your win … it is as everyone has agreed an empathetic poem appropriate for today … it’s heart-breaking what’s going on – well done – Hilary
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Congratulations on your win Carrie Ann. Well done!!
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