*This is my entry for the Challenge above
The Harvest
Last week we took the ATV
Down the dirt road to survey the fields
Brimming with corn, wheat, and beans
Daddy said it was going to be the best harvest yet
We’ll finally be able to pay the past dues
And save the fledgling farm
Mother Nature
Oh how we tend to forget about her
At times
She has no mercy, she does not care
Man is nothing but a nuisance
An unnatural specimen in a natural world
Since that day of his joyous declaration
She ravaged the fields with a fury my Daddy never saw before
Ruthless, savage like a shark in a frenzy
This morning, I stayed inside but
I watched as Daddy soberly walked those same fields
His shoulders slumped, his head low
The best harvest turned out to be our worst,
And his final
God rest his soul
(Word Count: 142; NCCO)
Toucing & tragic
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It really is tragic. So many fields not yet touched. So much water from the previous rain of September and the melting snow from last week’s snowstorms. So, so sad to see.
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City dwellers are quite often unmindful of how weather events, which are mere irritants in the cities, are life and death issues for others out in the countryside. Very compellingly portrayed in your entry.
Thank you for posting for WEP.
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Thank you Nilanjana 🙂
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We should respect Mother Nature, for she has no respect for us. Farmers are the unsung heroes of our nation, waging war against the elements with no assurance of victory.
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Hi,
It is sad. A father’s hope died and so did he. A dream deferred.
I like your poem.
Shalom aleichem.
Pat G
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Thank you, Pat! 🙂
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We humans really do mess up the planet for all the other species. We need to do so much better!
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I totally agree!
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A truly tragic little poem. Yes, Mother Nature could be ruthless and even cruel sometimes.
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Yes, she sure can be!
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Fire is Mother Nature’s weapon of choice here at the moment. And she has been wielding it with a vengeance. Teemed with relentless drought.
Your sad and beautiful poem makes my heart ache in sympathy.
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Drought and fires are particularly destructive! Stay safe!
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Guess you can’t predict anything with Mother Nature.
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No, that’s for sure!
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This poem is wonderfully written and so heartbreaking. Nature can throw you curve ball after curve ball. Farmers know that all too well. Thanks for sharing this poem with us!
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Thank you. Since we moved up here I have a new found respect for all that the farmers do for us!
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So tragic and real. An eloquent reality-check to those of us who live away from nature and rely on the land to make our living. How easy it is for many of us to downplay the destructive nature of the weather. Poignant.
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Thank you, Toi. Yes, I so agree.
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A very tough position to be in. My heart goes out to the farmers.
~Cie~
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Thank you, Cara. It wouldn’t take too many more of these types of weather patterns to push many of the famers up here to bankruptcy. So sad!
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You wonder how many times your poem is the actual story of what happens around the world. Weather is so fickle, and seems to be more horrific each year. I feel for our farmers. Nice job.
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Thank you, Cyndi. I wrote this poem with that thought in mind. It really hit me hard as I am personally seeing some of that play out up here.
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Oh dear – what a sad ending but it happens more often than we would like to believe. Being a farmer is one of the toughest jobs and the most thankless. Beautifully written.
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Thank you! So, so true!
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Great poem, giving first the hope and then the despair. Sad.
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Thank you, Sally for reading my poem!
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Thought-provoking and tragic. Is nature harsh or are we causing her to react excessively?
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Thank you. I often wonder the same thing. Lately though I am opting for the latter.
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Mother Nature sure can show us who really is in charge, sadly. Farmers sure have it rough this year with all the wild weather.
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That’s for sure!
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Mother Nature can deal without mercy when she chooses. The disappointment of the harvest bleeds through your poem. So sad and bitter. Captures the prompt with a deft hand.
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Hi Carrie Ann – oh how I feel for the farmers in the situations you describe … they do so much for us. We just can’t forward think the yearly weather. Your description of the father … rang so true – desperate.
Your part of the world sounds as though it’s had its fair share of difficulties recently, as too EC in Australia – where fire is the word of horror. Excellent poem … very evocative – I hope your farmers can get help and rectify their resources a little.
Congratulations on the poem of sad times … Hilary
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Farmers really do feel the blunt blow of mother nature. So many crops destroyed, true hardship.
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Really powerful writing. Deep. I enjoyed it.
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